Talk:Chau Khang

Feedback

Hello,

I have some feedback regarding the content and formatting of the article on Châu Chí Khang. Here are my suggestions:

1. Infobox: The infobox lacks an image of Châu Chí Khang. It would be helpful to include a suitable image to provide visual context.

2. Office Titles: The article lists multiple offices held by Châu Chí Khang, but it would be more informative to provide a brief description or context for each role. For example, you could include a sentence or two explaining the responsibilities and significance of each position.

3. Dates: The dates mentioned in the article (e.g., "Assumed March 2020") are not specific enough. It would be better to include the exact dates or at least the month and year to provide a clearer timeline.

4. References: It is important to include reliable sources to support the information presented in the article. Please consider adding appropriate references to verify the details mentioned about Châu Chí Khang's roles and achievements.

5. Categories: The article includes categories such as "2004 births" and "Living people," which seem appropriate. However, it would be helpful to add additional relevant categories, such as "Aenderia politicians" or "Vietnamese-Chinese politicians," to provide more context for readers.

6. Writing Style: Some sentences in the article could be rephrased for clarity and readability. For example, instead of "He is a Vietnamese-Chinese, who brings the Communism into Aenderia," you could say "Châu Chí Khang, a Vietnamese-Chinese individual, introduced communist ideologies into Aenderia."

I hope you find these suggestions helpful in improving the article. Please let me know if you have any questions or need further assistance.

Best regards,

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