Talk:Felinian Royal Family

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Oritsu.me  • Let's talk here  • Contribs, 10 June 2022

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The provided content appears to be an initial draft for an article about the Felinian Royal Family. While it provides some information about the family's history and key members, there are several areas that require improvement. Here is some feedback to consider:

1. Article Structure: The draft lacks a clear structure and organization. It would be beneficial to arrange the information into sections such as "History," "Key Members," and "Legacy" to make it more readable and coherent.

2. Neutral Tone: MW articles should maintain a neutral tone and avoid personal opinions or subjective statements. Make sure the language used is objective and does not excessively promote or praise the subject.

3. References: The content lacks proper citations and references to reliable sources. It's essential to support the information provided with credible sources to ensure the accuracy and verifiability of the article.

4. Clarity and Cohesion: Some sentences and phrases in the draft are unclear or confusing. Aim for clear and concise writing to enhance readability and comprehension.

5. Notability: While the draft mentions notable figures and changes within the Felinian Dynasty, it would be helpful to provide more specific information about their achievements, significance, or impact. This will help establish their notability and relevance within the article.

6. Grammar and Formatting: The draft contains grammatical errors, punctuation issues, and inconsistent formatting. It's crucial to proofread the text carefully and ensure consistent formatting throughout the article.

7. Expansion and Context: The provided content appears to be incomplete, with some areas lacking sufficient detail. Consider expanding on the history of the Felinian Dynasty, their traditions, and any significant events or milestones they have experienced.

8. Objectivity in Descriptions: The description of the relationships between Tina and other members of the dynasty seems overly personal and lacks an encyclopedic tone. Try to provide a more objective and factual account of these relationships.

Remember that this feedback is meant to improve the draft and align it with MW's guidelines and standards. --User:King Kevin of Blazdonia (talk) 03:07, 17 May 2023 (UTC)